12.16.2008

in remembrance

my sheets burst in flames
as we crackled like firecrackers
lighting up the gloom

in the silence of our cooling bodies
i planted a delicate kiss
on your nape, eyes closed

uttering a silent prayer
for each sweat-soaked thread
tasting all things stale and bitter-sweet

now in cinders

6 comments:

Mr. Scheez said...

Ang ganda naman ng poem. Kinda erotic but not in a bastos kind of way. Ahlavit! =)

gentle said...

tenx scheez! punta ka sa naked scribbles for more gentle poems! :)

PUSANG-gala said...

hmmm---nakaka--arouse ba? medyo na-imagine ko nga yung sa neck. soo sexxy....

Beaugarte said...

Galing...

Hay kakadepress naman yang poem na yan. :(

Abou said...

magaling magaling magaling

--E said...

ey... your poems are great... i suggest you post your links everytime you invite people to go somewhere else para di na sila maghanap sa main page mo... some people are lazy... ehehehe... it took me time to go to the poetry site...