5.05.2009

days roll by | poym-poyman sa aking nalalapit na kaarawan

they say
that days are like waves,
crashing onto shore;
a symphony slowly building
into sweet crescendo;
and we are but poorly made
sand castles, waiting to crumble
at the onslaught of such overcoming
magnificence

let me put it this way

I say
that days are like waves,
crashing onto shore;
a symphony slowly swelling
into sweet crescendo;
and we are
but sand castles swaying
swirling with their presence--
overcome by euphoria, even
as the last of our towers descend
grain per sweet grain
into murky sweetness

5 comments:

jaybeecc said...

when is your birthday? happy birthday! :)

gentle said...

ahehehe. there will surely be a birthday post, jaybeecc.. thanks for dropping by. :)

and drop by more often!

Mr. Scheez said...

Tumatanda ka na. Mauunahan mo na ako. LOL! =)

wanderingcommuter said...

how young are you?
its just numbers, remind this to me again when i reach 30. hehehe

gentle said...

@ scheez - ay, ano to, karera? una ka pa din naman no. hehehe.

@ ewik - consult my profile, my age is there for all to see hehehe.